We have enjoyed another busy week. Ashton and Toby from 5 MW would like to tell you about our post today:
We have been learning about haikus, where you have to write a poem which is 3 lines long. The first line is 5 syllables, the second is 7 and the third is 5. To check if you have the right number of syllables, you can clap whilst saying the word. When writing a haiku, you can describe emotions or words like snow, monkeys etc. You can make your haiku rhyme if you want to, but you don’t have to. Here are some of our modern haikus:
Fear
Body is trembling
Biting my lip really hard
Filling up with tears
Ella, 5MW
Boredom
Keep slumping over
Lost in a drought of nothing
I do not like this
Finley, 5MW
Angry
I was aggressive
Degusted, infuriated
In despair, felt betrayed
Jack 5LS
Powerful
Like a stampede
Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide
I need help, help me
Ruby 5LS
Here are some extended haikus we wrote too:
Anger
It smells like ashes
Here comes the hellish torture
Always attacking me.
My hope is long lost
I wish that no one was here
Come true, I need this
It tastes like a lime
Always bitter to me
I am mad at it
Sabela 5GT
Boredom
Nothing to enjoy
tastes like loneliness and guilt
I go to play games
Like devil’s murder
smells like a rainy weekend
sat there all alone
Misty and cloudy
horrible and deafening
stressed and wretched
Mason 5GT